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I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I just finished participating in National Novel Writing Month, so you'll be seeing parts from that for the next couple of weeks/month as I expand and edit. "Alright Molly, I know you've been waiting for this day for a long time." She was looking at her mothers face, surrounded by long curly blonde hair, as she bounced a new child on her hip. Was that number five, or six? "We brought in a special doctor from the city who says he can help you walk again." "I told you I can walk whenever I want, I just need to practice." "He has experience with this kind of thing. Your muscles need to be strengthened slowly." "Yes I know, I've been trying to tell you to let me out of bed for weeks. I feel too weak and I know that I need to get over it."
10 Comments
Naomi Shaw
1/28/2018 08:12:11 am
I can so relate to not being able to walk. I hope Molly agrees to see the doctor soon. Great snippet Shannon
Nancy Gideon
1/28/2018 10:07:43 am
It sounds like they want the same thing but are going about it in different directions. I hope they can work together! 1/28/2018 08:47:51 pm
Oh, this begs so many questions. :-) Great snippet--making the reader want to read more. :-)
Diane Burton
1/31/2018 08:07:38 pm
I like her courage and determination. Good scene. 2/4/2018 08:53:31 am
This whole series of snippets is very intriguing. I really want to know what happened to her. 3/4/2018 02:53:51 am
I love how much stubbornness and affection jumps out of your lines. Great snippet. Leave a Reply. |
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