I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. For my very first #8Sunday post on this website I have the first eight lines of the second scene of my Moon Murder rewrite. The first scene is available as an audio sample on my sample chapters page if you want to give it a listen!
It was impossible to miss the tall man standing next to the teal skinned alien holding a sign saying ‘Watts’.
Zheng walked up to them, “Are we in the 1950s now?”
“I had seen a movie where humans held signs while waiting for someone they hadn’t met before. Is this not normal?” Zheng took a moment to look the thing over before responding. Ignoring the blue skin he was almost human, yet parts of him were off. His eyes were big, and his head seemed out of proportion with his body. Almost like a child.
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DitS - Editing Lesson 14
14 Flash Fiction Pieces