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I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I have some lines from my Moon Murder rewrite. A little dialogue heavy, hopefully next week has some more action! "How did the trade deal go?" "As my report said, it went well." "You and I both know that you didn't actually make that trade." Alexander looked down as his feet. "16 took over." "I did use his notes. They were excellent," 16 said. "What did I say?" "That this was my assignment and that I shouldn't get help." Check out more at http://www.wewriwa.com/.
7 Comments
5/21/2017 06:34:14 am
A little 'talking head-ish' here but the dialog itself was nice and crisp and does make me wonder what the trade involved...intriguing snippet. 5/22/2017 02:59:52 am
Very intriguing snippet. I did find it a tad confusing but that's probably just me and the fact that it was in isolation . 5/22/2017 02:56:15 pm
Since this was taken out of context, it's a little confusing. Still, it makes the reader want to know more, which means reading more to find out. Good job. Leave a Reply. |
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