I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I have some lines from my Moon Murder rewrite. A little dialogue heavy, hopefully next week has some more action!
"How did the trade deal go?"
"As my report said, it went well."
"You and I both know that you didn't actually make that trade."
Alexander looked down as his feet. "16 took over."
"I did use his notes. They were excellent," 16 said.
"What did I say?"
"That this was my assignment and that I shouldn't get help."
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DitS - Editing Lesson 14
14 Flash Fiction Pieces