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Eight Sentence Sunday #10

5/20/2017

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I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I have some lines from my Moon Murder rewrite. A little dialogue heavy, hopefully next week has some more action!

"How did the trade deal go?"

"As my report said, it went well."

"You and I both know that you didn't actually make that trade."

Alexander looked down as his feet. "16 took over."

"I did use his notes. They were excellent," 16 said.

"What did I say?"

"That this was my assignment and that I shouldn't get help."

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Ed Hoornaert link
5/20/2017 09:47:56 pm

This is an interesting and mysterious conversation.

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Veronica Scott link
5/21/2017 06:34:14 am

A little 'talking head-ish' here but the dialog itself was nice and crisp and does make me wonder what the trade involved...intriguing snippet.

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Kim Magennis link
5/21/2017 09:17:56 am

Busted! I don't think 16s comment helped him much.

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Christina Ochs link
5/21/2017 04:10:25 pm

Interesting. I wonder if there'll be repercussions.

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Amy Braun link
5/21/2017 11:35:40 pm

Great snippet!

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Hywela Lyn link
5/22/2017 02:59:52 am

Very intriguing snippet. I did find it a tad confusing but that's probably just me and the fact that it was in isolation .

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Diane Burton link
5/22/2017 02:56:15 pm

Since this was taken out of context, it's a little confusing. Still, it makes the reader want to know more, which means reading more to find out. Good job.

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