I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I have the first eight lines of the second scene of my Moon Murder rewrite. The first scene is available as an audio sample on my sample chapters page if you want to give it a listen!
The female alien's opponent tried to get within striking zone, but she danced out of the way while getting in three more hits. He screamed as he charged towards her, "Fight me like a real person!" She took a step to the side, and then tapped his knee.
The man fell to the ground with a scream of pain. Holding his left leg in his hands.
"The winner in arena 14 is Diapycnal! The next contender for arena 14 against Diapycnal is Henry!"
Officials with gray overalls put the previous contestant on a stretcher and moved him to the recovery section of the rocky crags.
"Diapycnal! It’s been so long, I knew that I recognized her."
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DitS - Editing Lesson 14
14 Flash Fiction Pieces