I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I have some lines from my Moon Murder rewrite. The first scene is available as an audio sample on my sample chapters page if you want to give it a listen! 16 used her left hand to shield her eyes from the light above. “What is that? Its like a real sun.” She put her arm into a patch of light shining through the large leaves onto the stone path. “It’s warm like the sun too.” “It’s just like the rainforests your dad helped preserve…” Zheng touched one of the ferns, leaning into the walking area. “It’s real.” She continued to hold it, staring, as if she could barely believe in its existence. Check out more at http://www.wewriwa.com/.
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4/16/2017 11:17:36 am
I wonder what kind of world she comes from if she's confused by the sun. Or maybe I'm the one who's confused. Ah, the joys of the 8- to 10- sentence limitation. Looking forward to more.
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4/16/2017 11:34:33 am
What simple poetry in her discovery of what we take for granted. Nice scene, Shannon!
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4/17/2017 03:57:24 pm
Her sense of wonder is palpable. The questions raised are legion.
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4/17/2017 04:34:08 pm
Short and sweet. I'm not sure I quite follow what's going on, though.
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Diane Burton
4/19/2017 09:16:01 pm
I feel like Kimmydon in that I'm not sure what's going on. I probably missed a couple of weeks.
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