I present to you Eight Sentence Sunday, a blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. I have some lines from my Moon Murder rewrite. The first scene is available as an audio sample on my sample chapters page if you want to give it a listen!
16 used her left hand to shield her eyes from the light above. “What is that? Its like a real sun.” She put her arm into a patch of light shining through the large leaves onto the stone path. “It’s warm like the sun too.”
“It’s just like the rainforests your dad helped preserve…” Zheng touched one of the ferns, leaning into the walking area. “It’s real.” She continued to hold it, staring, as if she could barely believe in its existence.
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DitS - Editing Lesson 14
14 Flash Fiction Pieces